You’ve built the programme.
You know it delivers.
Your clients get results.
But when it comes to writing your sales page?
The words don’t quite land.

You’re second-guessing the headline.
You’re stuck editing the wrong things.
You wonder if people are clicking away because they just don’t get it.

Here’s the truth:
☑️ It’s not your offer.
❌ It’s the message.
(Your words at the top of your sales page are the wrong words.)

Now Let's Write Your Words That Sell

📊 80% of users never scroll past the headline
Your headline is your first (and often only) chance to capture attention. If it doesn’t resonate, most readers won’t continue.
Source: Copyblogger

📊 57 % of a visitor’s viewing time is spent on content above the fold
If the first screen does not hit home, you lose more than half their attention.
Source: Nielsen Norman Group

📊 45 % of visitors leave after fewer than 15 seconds
Your opening line must work fast or your dream client is gone.
Source: Chartbeat data

📊 Five times as many people read the headline as read the body copy
The headline carries the weight of your whole page.
Source: David Ogilvy

If your first line does not resonate, nothing below it can save the sale.

Let's save your sales.

It’s the one right at the top.

The hook.
The positioning.
The first few words that make someone say:
“This is exactly what I’ve been looking for.”

That’s what this workshop will help you write.

Not a full page.
Not a complicated funnel, because you can have a test-book funnel but if your words don't sell, you're screwed)
Just the single line that makes everything else work harder with less effort from you.